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I feel like each one holds a great deal of promise. There's some amazing detail happening. The only universal issue is that each of them could use a bit more follow-through. In the sense that they seem to go by a little quick. Perhaps more drawings is the answer, or just a different global pacing. The water one is the most dynamic by far, but needs to be slowed down and fully resolved...it goes to quick and is a little jerky in motion. But, otherwise, they're really bold compositions. Great job!